This is my humble attempt at poetry....hope it is worth reading.Let me know of any improvements or suggestions
Ecstasy
Sudden pull, a silent call
A minute had it all.
The throne of all emotions
Departed with complete devotion.
Heartbeat out of bounds
The moment doing the rounds
Of mind, unless it felt like
It had become your whole life.
Sudden bursting into a song,
Waiting seemed far too long.
Smiling when there was no reason,
“Beautiful” described every season.
Though it was a dream
Unimaginable, impossible it seemed.
Only wish, life being at its best
Was for it to forever last.
Sudden pull, a silent call
A minute had it all.
The throne of all emotions
Departed with complete devotion.
Heartbeat out of bounds
The moment doing the rounds
Of mind, unless it felt like
It had become your whole life.
Sudden bursting into a song,
Waiting seemed far too long.
Smiling when there was no reason,
“Beautiful” described every season.
Though it was a dream
Unimaginable, impossible it seemed.
Only wish, life being at its best
Was for it to forever last.
is it possible for u to teach me , how to attempt this "humble attempt" of urs?
ReplyDeleteand...im nt too gud at reading...and worse at comprehending... so...u mind telling what is it now that seems unimaginable?